Voice over

This week we are finishing off our voice over for our animation and this is what i did.

Recount

Back in 2014 I was five years old it was my first day of primary school I was so excited nervous and scared because I was a new person. Then it was time to go to school i had everything in my school bag so me and my mum went to the office and said that I was in room 20 so we walked to room 20 that was next to the office and when we went in it was amazing!!! I saw a lot of amazing things in there like art and other things and then I saw my teacher we had two teacher’s there name’s were Miss Belt and Miss George my mum told them that I was new. After that I had to go put my bag in the hallway on the hook and my mum had to go so i can start my day!
Then I sat on the mat with the student’s it was scary because I never sat next to people that i don’t know but it was worth it then they were teaching us somethings and it was reading and I was starting to read I was getting scared. It was morning tea and when it was morning tea I made a new friend her name was Debra and we started playing at the park.

Designing a sport

Point of veiw photo

Point of view of person taking the photo: ok lets do it now here it goes 3 2 1 jump!!! That was so cool but you
need to jump high Luisa so it looks the same but it still looks cool ok next one let's jump off the bench!!!.

Point of view of person taking the photo: ok lets do it now here it goes 3 2 1 jump!!! That was so cool but you need to jump high luisa so it looks the same but it still looks cool ok next one let's jump off the bench!!!.

Animation scripted

Hi my name is luisa and today i am going to show you my animation and here it goes  hi my name is max and welcome to the competition of hip hop vs ballet and know we let the battle begin hip hop is on first and know it is ballet. They have both finished know it is time to figure out the winner and he winner is hip hop.

Sheep photo

yesterday Me and my group took photo for the point of view and it was so much fun. 

Sheep dictation 2

When I walked i saw this crazy person in front of me?  She was recording me and i didn’t know what to do so I just keeped on walking and she turned so i walked faster and when i walked i did a loud low bleat then I walked past her. When i walked past her she walked back because she was scared so i ran and then she stopped recording and she turned and ran.

She ran because she was so afraid because she thought that i was going to chase her and she also stopped recording as well. And then i started having my free time.  

Sheep dictation

The mother sheep followed me along the path picking up the paste she released I was within touching distance of her lamb she let out her loud low bleat which ekod  across the petcah the sleeping lamb lifted his head and turned towards us before slowly returning to its sleep as the sheep got closer and closer I thought about weather I should turn and run I began to panic Was she going to attack me holding my breath and froze I side as the sheep dogged me and grabbing protectively towards its lungs  few that was a close one.

Narrative Writing

At 5 in the morning Victoria and Kolopa and Luisa sneaked into a house to steal money so they keeped on looking until they fond it. They were in the hallway and they founds LOTS of rooms so they did not Know if one of them are a room or not. Earlier that day the family decided to paint the door all white because they did not like the color before and things got crazy. victoria and kolopa are going so this was their plan victoria was going in a room and kolopa went into another room. When they checked it the neighbor woke up and knock on the door but the family didn't wake up so kolopa went to see in the key hole and it was luisa.But actually it was not it was a picture because the neighbor knowed there was a someone there so now they went into a fight and the family woke up and saw the fight so they decided to help the neighbors fight with them too and when they fighted the family pushed kolopa and victoria and luisa out there house and they started running away. Then it was the next day kolopa victoria and lusia knocked on the door to apologize and the family let them in and the sat on the couch and started talking and things got better and better. 


Today I had to peer edit with austin and we relased that we had to put fullstops in my story so it will make sence.

Narrative writing plan

Narrative writing

once upon a time There was a girl named naz that loved softball she will always win
and when her game was done she found a letter and said sign up for cooking club
and she took it home. When she was home she sat down on the couch she read the
letter she was excited and  she got up from the couch and danced she was so happy
that she found the letter so she went in her room and and she looked at herself in
the mirror and she said to herself Wait! but i have softball too and things has
started to hard she wanted to go the cooking club but she wanted to go softball too
then it was the next day she got dressed for school and when she was at school her
friends were there there names were sarah and rose she when she saw them she was
going to tell them but she didn't cause she thought that they won’t be her friends
again. The bell rang and it was time to go to class her face looked nervous and she
has never been nervous before so her friends asked her why she looked nervous and
she said she wasn't nervous and her friends were talking without her and she shy.
now it was lunch time her friends came to her and got there lunch they went to eat
there lunch outside naz slide over and her friends slide over too but now naz was
going to tell them that she was going to sign up when her friends heard it they were
shocked and things got worse naz was going to the bathroom and her friends follow
ed her then she went back outside and her friends kipped following her then naz ask
ed why are you following me and they said because we decided to come with you and now
they have all become friends again.

Writing plan

Compound sentence a simple sentence and a complex sentence.

On Monday room 10 had to write three things. The sentence we had to write was a compound sentence a complex sentence and a simple sentence. it was so fun to write and easy. 

 

Dancing on the stage with my cousins

On Saturday me and my cousins were going to dance on the stage. when I was dancing I felt pretty nervous and I was shaking. It was fun to dance and I was proud of Myself.

Untie the human knot

1. On Monday room nine and room ten.We  are supposed to get into groups and make a circle so we can touch each others hand  to cross your it  and you have to grab it. You are not supposed grab the other person’s hand that’s next to you because they can untie themselves really fast. If you garb the person’s hand that is next to you then you will have to start again. If you have finished then you have to line up in a line and wait for the other group to finished and it was really fun and cool.

My cousins cake.

On Saturday it was my cousins wedding and this is the cake. 

Get to tell you about me.

 

hi my name is Luisa I'm am eight years old  and I like to play sport my favourite sport to play is softball. it is very fun to play and it is  cool  the coach have to choose a team so they can play in the game.

Respect

Today we are learning about Respect. To respect other people and take care of them so they can be happy.

About me

On Wednesday we are taking about ourselves and where were from.